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Wishing on Stars

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                                                      When I wish upon a star,
                                                      My heart is where you are.
                                                      Thankfully you are never too far.
                                                        
this sounds really just . I don't like it. for you writers, please tell me how to make it better. PLEASE!!!!! THIS STINKS!!! but it rhymes, so :shrug: I still don't really like it. so anyway, yeah this is probably something someone else wrote it, if that's true, I'll take it off.
thank you for in advance comments and :+fav:s :heart: :hug:
~KP <>< <3
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Beloved-Blackrose
Very AWESOME!
LOVIT!!